Saturday, April 26, 2008
Haiku
I.
stale costume drama
made better by popcorn and
your hand in my pants.
II.
tied to none but myself,
I point my toes at your touch.
the string tugs my balls.
III.
your mom’s sweater rack?
in your room, transformed.
last night’s spreader bar!
Posted by Prospero on 04/26/08 at 11:49 PM
Comments:
Ooo! Haiku!
Very nice!
I’m happy to see that you finally got commenting working here!
- nina
Posted by nina aoki on 04/28/08 at 12:46 PM
Thanks, nina. Maybe you would know. Are these actually more senryu than haiku? They don’t really have any seasonal allusions.
Yes, comments are working again. Huzzah! I can’t tell you how good it feels to just be able to post without fighting server errors.
Posted by Prospero on 04/28/08 at 11:24 PM
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